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Dark Poetry #3

Ghosts and angels

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-12-18 01:29 PM

Your words are smoke,
ghosts and angels --
leafy wings left winded.
Dropping chimes through buried cold.
Sounding hollow -- marrow metal.

Quite a random transit,
syllables within your mouth.
Then through then,
as though through breath. Waiting
for the next intake.

Your words both haunt and comfort
like a sunbeam felt too high.
Burning through the piping trees.
Strength within the threat of sting.

Now one chime in largesse climbs.
Words as smoke imprint the sky.
Ghosts and angels crawling by.
Sink below the sunset line.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-12-19 12:15 PM

BRAVO

I love the imagery, especially those crawling angels.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-12-19 12:26 PM

Thanks, Kacey.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2002-12-27 07:24 AM

yea, does she rock you tho?
dont analyze her so much if she does.
like your stuff. thanks for commenting on my
ramblings in this folder, im honored

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-12-30 07:37 PM

No reason to feel honored, inkedgoddess. And this poem isn't really about anything much at all.

Mike

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2003-01-01 01:36 PM

"not about anything much at all"

Still...Poetry, being what it is, conveys.

I like this Mikey, for my own reasons.

Ed

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-01-02 10:48 PM

Thanks, wranx!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-01-03 03:36 AM

Like this...James

LADY_DEATH
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

8 posted 2003-01-03 08:41 AM

Lady_Death says "wow!Hope i'm there one day.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2003-01-03 11:50 AM

Thank you!

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