Dark Poetry #3 |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
You held me through guilt. You took me for granted. Your mouth will be of pavement. When I smash it in the ground. I’m sick of your voice. I’m sick of your talk. I’m sick of you. And your sick of me. For once I guess things worked out. But nothing ends happily. You sucked away my pain. You’re a maggot of God. This God is un-existing. This God, you think is you. The day I cut off your wings And watch you fly. The day I rip out your heart And watch you live; not die Will be the day That I believe that you’re …this… “God” But until that day You are worthless, and mean nothing to me. Until you prove to me You’re special You’re unordinary, I’m going to try to forget about you. -Sara (lovely Love poem, ain't it?) You laugh at me, because i'm different. I laugh at you, because you're all the same. [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-04-2002 07:17 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Since you request that no one praise your work, I would suggest that you lose this line. "You’re worth holding onto," Your poetry is really very good...so there! ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Thank you for your honesty. ![]() -Sara You laugh at me, because i'm different. |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Its really good , maybe i need to show this one to my ex . ![]() Do I dare to look at whats really there, |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Amazing. I think that about sums it up. *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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