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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-03 10:22 PM

You held me through guilt.
You took me for granted.
Your mouth will be of pavement.
When I smash it in the ground.
I’m sick of your voice.
I’m sick of your talk.
I’m sick of you.
And your sick of me.
For once I guess things worked out.
But nothing ends happily.
You sucked away my pain.
You’re a maggot of God.
This God is un-existing.
This God, you think is you.

The day I cut off your wings
And watch you fly.
The day I rip out your heart
And watch you live; not die
Will be the day
That I believe that you’re
…this…
“God”
But until that day
You are worthless, and mean nothing to me.
Until you prove to me
You’re special
You’re unordinary,
I’m going to try to forget about you.

-Sara
(lovely Love poem, ain't it?)

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-04-2002 07:17 PM).]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-07-03 10:51 PM

Since you request that no one praise your work, I would suggest that you lose this line.

"You’re worth holding onto,"

Your poetry is really very good...so there!

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere