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And Then You Hurt Me
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And Then You Hurt Me |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
And.Then.You.Hurt.Me I’ve heard that love hurts. But I didn’t think it could feel like this. I’ve heard it burns. But I never knew that it could be true. But you know me, I had to find out for myself, And now all is empty, And now all is gone. I’ve lost more than a friend, You were everything to me. But I had to fall in love And then you hurt me. I’ve heard that boys cheat. But I didn’t think that was like you, I’ve heard they lie. But you’d never done me wrong. But you know me, I had to take a chance. Andnow my ocean is shallow And filled with sharp steep rocks. I’ve lost you more than once, But now it’s not pretend. But I had to fall in love And then you hurt me again… But then I had to find out for myself And then I learned That it all is true That I can’t trust you, I never would have guessed That you’d make me a fool… You laugh at me, because i'm different. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sara, this theme is universal. Most of us write about a betrayal (or several)and no one likes the way it feels. You have done an admirable job expressing yourslf in this piece. Keep up the good work. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Thank you so much. Your compliment is greatly appreciated. -Sara  You laugh at me, because i'm different. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
So sad Sara...So sad but beautiful. You really know how to put your feelings into words. *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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