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My dark journals (Dark challenge)
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My dark journals (Dark challenge) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Here's a response to my own poetry challenge... My dark journals I keep sun in my dark journals. It's how I build the night. I keep birds in my dark journals. They never sing in flight. I keep forests in my dark journals. The paths within diminished. I keep words in my dark journals. You wrote some, too. Unfinished. I keep shadows in my dark journals. They seem to write their own forms. I keep rainfall in my dark journals. Uncurled soundrush of storms. I keep the sea in my dark journals. Slowing apex movement. I keep songs in my dark journals. Harmony improvement. I keep tarnish in my dark journals to give your silver dimming light. I keep sadness in my dark journals to leave you seemingly no sight. I keep death in my dark journals. Whether or not you want this pain. I write life in my dark journals. Now you understand my reign. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
AMAZING. I love your way of writing. But then, a LOT of the work on this forum is simply fantastic. I've come to the right place  "The only real blasphemy is the refusal of joy" |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Hmm... Spooky. Dark. Yet when you threatened to write this as Bronwen, I went totally on guard, so I'm disappointed that it didn't turn out dangerous. C'mon, y' can't get an evil idea then not go through with it!"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I enjoyed the colorful you in this Mike... excellent examples!!! and here I went off with the whole stalker idea!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you all enjoyed. And Lori, my heart wasn't in it. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"I keep tarnish in my dark journals To give you silver dimming light" that's purdy dark Mike. You really put some good stuff together for this write!! Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Yr heart wasn't in it, huh? Look, I'm still standing on the edge of a poetic writer's block, so we'll see about me tackling this subject once I get my next Kissably chappy off. "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, Kris. I didn't choose on bein' a moderator for Dark before without a reason. And y' don't have t' write a response to the challenge, baby. *kiss* These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wasn't going to read these until I wrote my own answer to the challenge, but I seem to be having a word drought here. I thought the "list type" repetitions very effective, and as ya know, I'm a fan of of your daring imagery...groan...I only THOUGHT I was "blocked" before, now I am intimidated too! sigh much love to the dark genius! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well done, Mikey... miss reading your poems! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for visiting! Don't leave! Appreciate it, Sen and Tier.These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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