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Deep in the Dark |
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Deepdarkangel55 New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 7Somewhere deep in wonder |
Deep in the Dark I watch you You don't see me but you can feel me there among you You wanna run, you wanna hide But I'll hunt you down Deep in the Dark you do those things that you think you'll get away with You hurt the innocent and take away there life or what they have But I'll get you and justice will be served Deep in the Dark, things haunt you You say you have no fear but your action prove you wrong The wonder of what is going to happen nexts eats at you Deep in the Dark, you wonder how this came to be Will it ever end or will you still have Misery? |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Actions prove the no fear wrong...indeed. This'll hit many on totally different levels. Totally dark, but a "present darkness" that admitted or not, most have. You scared me with this one, which I am sure my subconscious would say was the intent. Good job! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very, very enjoyable read Deepdark. A similar thing dwells within me...OOPS.., You just gave me a kernel. Thanks for the piece, thanks for the idea, I'll just go rip you off now. ~wranx (the thief) "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*grinnin* at wranx and his theif stuff... This was madly passionate in darkness... good stuff!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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