Dark Poetry #3 |
War Child |
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
While the child sleeps Misty dark shadows banishes love A chilling sphere binds tomorrow's laugh... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"A chilling sphere binds tomorrow's laugh" You almost suffocated me with this line. wonderful write! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
A lot of darkness in there.... unleash it, I'm waiting for more "if every cloud has a silver lining, how come the cloud is much bigger?" - Something I asked my mum a long time ago |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
interesting arthur |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
My dear readers... thank you for your sweet words about my poem! Love, Light and Happiness! Neeraja |
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