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On False Pretense |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Alright Mikey...this one is for all your Mopin~ about the forum!!! (blatant support  ) Here's one I don't think ya'll have seen...Bend my will, break my soul- Tell me truths- remain untold- Steal my fire- drown the spark, Crumble lies upon this heart... Turn your cheek, crack a smile- Believe in love- as is denile, See me wither, feel my tears- Remember not a happy year... Catch me never, watch me fall- Bleed my mind- won’t hurt at all, Hold me shaken, nay- just stare- Bruised and broken, body bare... Pray not upon my stone of time- Cremate your promises sublime, Seek in me, all that you fear- Know my breaking point is near... Feel the cosmos drain of light- Seeing life- no longer bright, I beg you, do not hesitate- Tread upon my weakened state... Drink of tears, so newly born- A crown of pain, I shall adorn- Just for you, my faithless friend- May darkness spill your cursed end... *k...feel better now... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (06-27-2002 03:21 AM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Remind me not to make you upset  You're evil D....naaahhhh!! Actually, you've described my ex perfectly. Did you know her? I love it!! Krish your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
The greatest line I have read in a very long time: "Cremate your promises sublime" And I hope Mr. Mope appreciates the attention. "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Kris- evil, yes...dillusional..nooo *I've NEVER dated high maintanence women!!* It's a rule!!  Ya, this one is about my ex...before I found perfection...there had to be this I suppose...*sigh* Thank you sweets...Lori-Ah, but you do exsist deary...you shed both light and dark in this place...(if that is possible..lmao) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm so goth, in the past few days I've listened to R.E.M., David Bowie and ... ooo, wait for it! ... the Red Hot Chili Peppers. Uh huh, I'm not very goth at all. Loved the poem, d! I guess I'll have to reciprocate in adult, huh? Try out yr challenge... Much love. Mikey Mope These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
definantly not!! may Lady Lori runeth you over my man!!!  *chuckling devious to herself* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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