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Where Are My Lions?
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Where Are My Lions? |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Where are my lions present and future Where are my big cats sarcastically smiling dazzling everyone they're exposed to Where are my lions scorching you like an arrogant murderer with display of pride and brilliant playfulness leaping and leaping around "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm; yes, |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is cool...Your tenses are mixed, and usually that convolutes a poem but for some reason it really works here... 'Where are my lions scorching you like an arrogant murderer with display of pride and brilliant playfulness leaping and leaping around' Anyway, welcome to passions, I'll be looking out for your work.  K |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Now that is original and cool!  Cool dream imagery ideas in this one.These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
You and Tiersdin need to get together and discuss this scorch idea! lol ... I dunno, although my feeble little mind may not exactly hone in on your wave-length in your writings, they are still unbelievably readable, and smooth. I like tremendously...Keep up the good yet perplexing work! |
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