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Deepdarkangel55 New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 7Somewhere deep in wonder |
My first love left me My best friend died My hopes and dreams faded away My world crashed around me I cried for many days and nights Nothing seem to ease the pain I decided to do something dramatic I knew in time I would regret it or what was going to be left As I went gun in my hand, something came over me All I remember is bright flashes and a voice Next thing I knew I was down on the floor praying From there on I knew there was somthing out there to ease the pain In the end I found what I was looking for Have you found it? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very powerful poem. It reminds me of a scene from Johnny the Homicidal Maniac (don't laugh, it's a well-thought out, awesomely drawn book) where 'Nny puts a gun to his head and says "Over the stars." Doesn't do it, though. Like this. I like how the answer is left as a question, too. Great poem. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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