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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Another Anvrill/bsquirrel thingie. Moon of two The dark is thirsty, my love. I wonder if you dare to quench it? Will you drink my shadow shape as though it were a cooling drink? Tease your fingers in the sea of my salt and tide? Break the glass in celebration upon my ship's side? With every kiss, will you swallow me whole? Let the entire night then drown with you. Can we writhe in these black waters together? Slowly, so slowly, running out of breath. Put the moon on a spoon ... swallow its white light. Put ourselves upon the moon and stay up all night. Become the reflection of light in a darkened sky, hold out your finger -- your rays of white. We can touch the earth now, if we want. Your gravity makes my tide. Rise. Oh drown the shore of I. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I am now going into denial about having had any part in writing that.  It was all you, baby, all you! Yeh.Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Wrooooong! You rock, admit it. Before everybody else does for you. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I find it funny that when you announce in the title, basically, it will be much read... No one does. Nice goin', Mr. Mope."Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
squirrel dude, Is it like bad manners to comment on a moderators' post?? You know, like tipping the bar owner? If so, I never said how much I like this piece, and will deny it, if pressed. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Put ourselves upon the moon and stay up all night. Become the reflection of light in a darkened sky, hold out your finger -- your rays of white. We can touch the earth now, if we want. Your gravity makes my tide.' This is some awesome writing, Mike...I am amazed by the imagery in this...truly a brilliant poem! sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Lori and I both thank you. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. -RHCP [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-25-2002 10:20 PM).] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Mike...Lori...WOW!! This is one for the times. your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ah lady...I see you're still handling him nicely..lol You two together...just simply ROCK!!! *big freaggin smiles here* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I notice when the males respond, they mostly just acknowledge Mike... So thank you, Devina! I exist again. I feel all warm and fuzzy. Whoah. Now maybe Mike won't have to use subliminal messaging in his poetry.And I just realized that the first poem we wrote together (this year; we had a spree two years back, and it was very filled with sex and/or lovey dovey stuff, which is quite the combination) was all foom with the fire and the burning (may Roman Dirge forgive me!), and the second was all sploosh with the water and the drowning. Now we just need earth and air, and we're ready. (Oh, and Kris, thank you also for acknowledging my existence in the creation of this piece. I really do like existing. )"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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