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The Pain Chain
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The Pain Chain |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
The chain of pain is endless Each loop strong and hard Forged with hot ore Turned frigid cold Links tightly bound together Unyielding strength binds Threads of steel Binding pain Loop by loop Link by link A chain is only as strong as it's weakest link Or is the weakest link the strongest? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Succinct and well crafted. Very, very nice. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This poem is deserving of more comment than it received, so I'll say again...very nice. Now, write about the pain, not the chain. It is right there, waiting to be commited to paper. Start the pen, it wants to be written. ~wranx |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like this chain, even when I get wrapped in it and start seeing strange colors and ... uh ... yes, very cool! She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Ooh, mind-trippy and moody. I most definitely approve. Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Ditto all of the above... ~Tier  "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Okies. May I just say how much I miss your work? Loved this, Lady. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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