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senorita New Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 2 |
I miss you already, so I cry No, you can't leave me Without you I'll die You're here now But I know you'll go soon I can't live without you, I don't know how So I cherish every moment with you And tell myself you won't go So I don't feel blue I don't think I can go on without you When you do leave I won't know what to do Cry for days and nights Wish on stars for you to come back Sit alone in the dark, turn off all the lights I feel like your already gone I need to be with you, mi amor I want to be trough with life, done |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
It wasn't until I got to the closing line that I got an understanding, and appreciation for this one. I do like your adherence to the style of this poem. A very good write! |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
Great poem. so full of emotions. I look forward to reading more  BTW, I saw that you just got here on the two days ago, and I just want to say Welcome |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned first post. Welcome to Passions! I'm sure you will love it here. I look forward to seeing more of your writing. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Aww...that's so sad. I liked it. It was a good first post. I kinda would like to know the story behind it. Hope to hear more from you. *darkstar* |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
welcome liked it more please arthur |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
this is a great poem...and realli sad...~hugs~ blakloks |
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