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Dark Poetry #3

Star Havens

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-05-30 12:09 PM

Star Havens

Twilight satins,
Mist of sky;
As Earth hums eves,
Of insectal rain cries.
This slimmer of air breezes,
& the quiver pulse rise;
Toward Star Havens,
Myth Raiders on high.
Such as with a tear,
Myth - Raiders of heart;
Seeds reaching rain cries,
Piercing a companion.
Sighting echos imprisoned,
In pains ryhme;
Begging mist,
Comes the rise.
Tears gentles from eyes,
Myth - Breaker;
The companions warmth grows,
Star Havens - The Try...

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-05-30 11:32 AM

I really liked that is was different. I might have to go find some more of your stuff.
-Neala

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

2 posted 2002-05-30 02:50 PM

Very complicated to read but overall I liked it... Good Work!

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

3 posted 2002-05-30 08:39 PM

This poem confused me, yet it was very interesting to read! I'm always up for reading interesting stuff. Overall, Good write!
LadyPeach1

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