Dark Poetry #3 |
Love Hurts |
Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
"love hurts" Is this love? Can it be something so right hurts so much? I know its love when I am with you and long for your touch. But I guess with love comes hurt..the good and bad? But I don't understand it how can love make me so sad? Before I met you I prayed for love everynight. I fell head over heels in love with you at first sight. That was the good but then came the heart break. You took my heart, wich I let you take. You walk away without giveing a hug or saying goodbye.. At first I always thought it was just you being shy. And then you go and cheat on me, And I wonder whats wrong with me. My feelings still here for you but shouldn't be. You ask me for forgiveness, I don't know if i should. I know our love wont last, sitting here wishing it could. So I give you another chance, hopeing to god it will last. I told you it wouldn't be easy, but lets forget the past. Everytime you go away from me I think of you with another guy. I try hard to dispurse this idea, but I can't and I know why. You still treat me as if you don't want me around. Even though I shower you with my love pound by pound. So I figure your still cheating on me, with another man. But for some odd reason here I still am. My love for you will never perish, For the time I spent with you I will always cherish. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Love hurts. I know. Sometimes they say true love is letting go. I say blah. Good poem Dustin. |
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angeliceyes48198 Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16Michigan,USA |
I know how you feel. There was someone I loved once upon a time and now I not only lost a lover but a close friend as well. |
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jenn08 Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 12Wa, USA |
No one has a life without love, and of course, with love comes pain. Love deals with the heart, and unfortunately, they can break. But everyone goes through this, it's a part of life, a part of living. Know that you're not alone in this, but stay strong to what you Feel is right, what you know. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Your words totally hit me like a brick wall, this poem was SO sad. To be hurt in that kind of way can tear a person in to pieces. It hurts to be hurt, and I know how it feels. Love isn't easy, But true love always finds a way. Keep your chin up hunny! Good write. LadyPeach1 |
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