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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
0 posted 2002-05-22 10:51 PM

hate me
hate me
hate me
surface water
you'll never have the courage
to dive beneath the waves
love me
love me
love me
you are afraid
you might
drown

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MIdsummerRain
Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri
1 posted 2002-05-24 11:54 PM

"...love me
love me
love me
you are afraid
you might
drown..."

:::SiGhs::: Perfect...Simply Beautiful

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18
ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
2 posted 2002-05-25 03:24 AM

I am impressed with how much truth there is in such short verse, it says so much with so little... very excellent.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.
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