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since 2000-08-09
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Port Richey, Fl, USA

0 posted 2002-05-20 11:03 PM


here I stand alone
no place to call my home
walk further past the light
and into darker night
the shadows move with ease
softly on the breeze
there is not turning back
I have choosen my own path
crying in the dark
a deep wound in my heart
the world was never kind
shattered my fragile mind
lying broken on the floor
my hope rises nevermore

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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA
1 posted 2002-05-22 10:53 PM

well expressed and voiced...i hope you find a clear path soon.
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
2 posted 2002-05-25 03:20 AM

This expresses your feeling so picture perfectly... you are not alone in that dark place though, all us in Dark passions are there with you

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-04-12 11:53 PM

A very good write....

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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since 2003-04-09
Posts 42

4 posted 2003-04-13 01:37 AM

very sad write! you express your feelings well ! keep up the good work!
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