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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Abandoned here I stand alone no place to call my home walk further past the light and into darker night the shadows move with ease softly on the breeze there is not turning back I have choosen my own path crying in the dark a deep wound in my heart the world was never kind shattered my fragile mind lying broken on the floor my hope rises nevermore |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
well expressed and voiced...i hope you find a clear path soon. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This expresses your feeling so picture perfectly... you are not alone in that dark place though, all us in Dark passions are there with you  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A very good write.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
very sad write! you express your feelings well ! keep up the good work! |
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