Dark Poetry #3 |
Every Day |
Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
I am sorry if this makes no since to you it was written for a friend. Who will hopefully read it. __________________________________________________________________ Every Day In the morning I see you walk across the commons And you sit next to me Today you wern't there And you said, "(Nothing)" Every Day In the afternoon I call you up Pour out my little life Across that phone Today you called me And you said, "I don't think we should talk" Every Day In the past I use to have Are now lost things cause Today I don't know you And you said, "Hi, My names Joe." -Neala [This message has been edited by Neala (05-15-2002 09:53 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well yes it does make sense as there is a lot of hurt in this poem and I hope whomever reads it understands that and you get a big hug ~ Carpe' Diem ~ |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
I am glad you understood it and I hope he does read it. Thanks. -Neala |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
he did read it |
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