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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
Its 2 in the morning at this moment. I can't seem to fall asleep. My mind is running wild... and i can't find the sheep. Today wasn't so good, I felt the ache once more. love has left a hole, a devoid in my hearts door. All my cliche thoughts of love... Have got me nowhere, but the gutters of sorrow, and to the hospitals we share. So now i search one more time, to find my true mate. but is all this so true.. the words of our god? and our fate? |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Thoughs always makes us wonder and love itself is a matter of its own. Nice work Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
I liked this alot. Very well written and nicely expressed. But believe me, true love is out there. I finally found mine!!! YEAH!! Good Luck Dark A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
ditto, dark - i found mine  it's there, but you do have to work for it - and sometimes you have to remember that in order for God to make room in your heart for a great love, He first has to make a great hole for it to fit in... -Dave |
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Rebelious Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 57Kansas, USA |
Thank you for the reply's. Dave, thank your especially for what you said... that makes alot of since what you said... I really don't think i have ever heard anything more insiteful in my whole life. Wish i would have thought of it that way. Thank you. Dustin |
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