Dark Poetry #3 |
Back To You! |
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
BACK TO YOU! I've dreamed of getting married, ever since very young. Now I see it with you. I want you to be the one! I've always pictured my dream house, now I need you to have a part. One place for us to share, you've already found the key to my heart. I've dreamed of teaching children, since the day I stepped into school. Now I want you there to greet me, after a long day, a kiss from you. I've always wanted children, since I could play pretend. Now I see them with your eyes, part of you in the end. Everything in my life, my hopes, my future, my dreams, all come to a halt, because without you, impossible it seems. I know my way back to you. Can you find your way to me? Can we make this all work? Is this the future you see? ELMO |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Katie, this is such a sweet wish. I hope that everything works out for you and your boyfriend. sky |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx Sky!! I hope so too!! ELMO |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Wow... Well-written. I hope your boyfriend knows what a special person he's with! Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
this is in fact a cute write... i am sort of curious as to how it ended up in "Dark," though. seems more like the kind of thing that would go in "Open." it's a good bit of writing, sufficiently so that i'm going to add you to my library, elmo, but i'm lost wondering how you picked this forum for it. -Dave |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx you guyz!! Yea well it got into the dark passions because this is the only forum I usually post in, cuz most of my stuff belongs here & the guy that I wrote this about is someone who I am no longer with & I wish he knew his way back to me--but thanx again for the replies!! ELMO |
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