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trevorskogsbergh
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since 2000-02-03

Posts 129
South Pasadena, CA

0 posted 2002-03-20 04:00 AM

In the dead of the night
The voices within
Continue to scream in my mind
Incredibly confused
And not understanding
No pity from them will I find

They tell me things
And control my thoughts
I lose all self-control
Trying to sleep
My thoughts start to wonder
My mind begins to slow

Beads of sweat
Flow down my brow
As my heads caves slowly in
My eye's closed tight
Hands over my ears
As the voices slowly win

Better to die, and sleep
The never-waking sleep, than linger on
And dare to live when the souls life is gone.

© Copyright 2002 Trevor Skogsbergh - All Rights Reserved

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

1 posted 2002-03-20 07:08 PM

Nice one!!!

Mags

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

2 posted 2002-04-05 05:38 AM

Well written and expressed

Voices tend to get they way sometimes without you knowing it ....

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Deputy Moderator 1 Tour

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

3 posted 2002-04-05 09:44 AM

I woulD Do whAT THe voICes TelL Me BuT TheY DoNt SPeaK My lAnguagE
-Dave

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2002-04-06 02:36 PM

Well done! Very enjoyable piece.

Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul.
- The Angry Bard me (me)

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