Dark Poetry #3 |
This Pain |
lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
Flames of hate are rising, anger bubbling over. Its intensity is surprising and difficult to hold under, under my skin, in my mind. I'm tired of being so kind. Don't wanna keep my thoughts unknown. Loyalty is breached, no solution can be reached. Calmness overthrown by rage, fueled by betrayal, alienation imminent, no sympathy for the loyal, Only hostility. Stinging words used malapropriately, truth tainted by gossip. One trying discreetly to sever the bonds of friendship. Rationality thrown away, this pain is here to stay... |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Your way of writing somewhat reminds me of my own. Enjoyed this piece, this pain.. ~Broken~ Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
You're poem basicly describes the reason why i've been away for so long from passion n my poetry .... the pain, the hurt, nicely said my dear friend Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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