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Dark Poetry #3

This Pain

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

0 posted 2002-03-13 03:23 PM

Flames of hate are rising,
anger bubbling over.
Its intensity is surprising
and difficult to hold under,
under my skin, in my mind.
I'm tired of being so kind.

Don't wanna keep my thoughts unknown.
Loyalty is breached,
no solution can be reached.
Calmness overthrown
by rage, fueled by betrayal,
alienation imminent, no sympathy
for the loyal,
Only hostility.

Stinging words used malapropriately,
truth tainted by gossip.
One trying discreetly
to sever the bonds of friendship.
Rationality thrown away,
this pain is here to stay...

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

1 posted 2002-03-16 12:24 PM

Your way of writing somewhat reminds me of my own.
Enjoyed this piece, this pain..

~Broken~

Base not your joy upon the deeds of others,
for what is given can be taken away. -Peter Steele

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

2 posted 2002-03-22 02:15 AM

You're poem basicly describes the reason why i've been away for so long from passion n my poetry .... the pain, the hurt, nicely said my dear friend

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

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