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Encarta
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

0 posted 2002-03-04 04:12 PM

When love ends

When you sit to wait to die
And you wonder to yourself why
Why did I leave all I cared for
Why did I kick them out my door

Then you stand and look up to the sky
As a single tear falls from your eye
And you fall onto the ground
Begging for someone to be around

But no one's around, not a single friend
All because you caused your love to end
So you close your eyes to cry
As you lower your head to die

[This message has been edited by Encarta (03-04-2002 04:13 PM).]

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2002-03-04 10:13 PM

Encarta,

Powerful emotions spoken here. I hope you know that you are never alone, even when it seems like there is no one there, some one cares. I hope this was a work fiction and you aren't feeling this alone.
With that said, good write

I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

I forgot to say welcome to Passions

I've just noticed you're new to the blue pages. Welcome

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-04-2002 10:14 PM).]

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2002-03-05 06:11 AM

Well written. I think I catch your vibe here.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Encarta
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

3 posted 2002-03-05 03:34 PM

Thanks. I'm not feeling that alone. It's just fiction. It just came to me one day, around christmas time, so I wrote it down.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2002-03-16 03:05 PM

Wow this is a great one--well written--I know this feeling exactly! I shut everyone out around me & I wonder why I'm soo alone--lol!

ELMO

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

5 posted 2002-03-19 10:16 PM

Sounds familiar, I do relate. Nicely done.
Notice my signature.

~Broken~

Base not your joy upon the deeds of others,
for what is given can be taken away. -Peter Steele

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

6 posted 2002-03-22 02:12 AM

So much emotions yet in such few words .... Gosh, you are something ..... look forward to reading more of your poems

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-03-22 09:02 PM

I know the regrets can be very painful when we realize we totally messed up a wonderful opportunity...I believe new opportunities eventually come to us and hopefully we will be ready to take advantage...James

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