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Dark Poetry #3

When Love Fails

Encarta
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

0 posted 2002-02-26 04:43 PM

When Love Fails

The leaves changed colors in my eyes
Darkness has overcome the sky
Shadows has appeared to remind me
That dust I am, and dust I shall be

Surly this will bring the end
I saw the beginning twist and bend
To my heart, it sent the pain
And, through my eyes, I see the rain

Like bullets to the target, it hit my heart
Cutting right through it, splitting it apart
Now I'm left standing here, to morn
But, deep inside, I still see the storm

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

1 posted 2002-02-26 06:11 PM

Very well written and well expressed. I could feel your pain.

Loved it,
Mags

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

2 posted 2002-02-27 06:22 PM

Wonderful. I'm like Kisses, I can relate to your feelings.

---Night Angel

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

3 posted 2002-02-28 12:54 PM

If we open our arms to another do we not expose ourselfs to both love or the deepest wounds?A person with their arms clenched over their chests can not give a hug.I have wraped my arms around clenched arms and tried to give the warmest hug.Sometimes it helps.

paladin

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