Dark Poetry #3 |
- The Cadence of the Storm - |
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Blood and salty tears; Mingling with the weather. Trickling down your face; A brilliant night; December. You run faster and look back, Running from the shadows there. Black stone beneath your feet; Gleaming, fresh, midnight air. Can’t see the foot before you, And the black envelops light. The moon has left the darkness. Bright stars eluded night. The cadence of the storm Sings the rhythm of the patter. Pounding through your thoughts; Breaking, falling; shatter. Faster yet and running still. Each muscle twinges; shout. To move is to allow the pain, Imploring minds, no need to doubt. Slow down to a crawl now, And let the shadow come. Breathing in and out and gasping Now, where did you run from? - And so it was that time stood still - [This message has been edited by GG (12-10-2002 05:09 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
GG~ OH...I like this very much! I enjoyed your choice of words and how you used them, and the rhythm and flow had me hanging on for the ride. Very nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Thank you much for you kind words! It was some walk! ;-) Take care! Always, GG - And so it was that time stood still - |
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