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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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Why do you have to do this? And why do you have to say These things that really hurt me? Surely it’s not just your way When everything is quiet I turn around and you’re there You can’t really be so bad That you like to see me scared. You have taken me back years To a time I’d rather not relive, A time when someone hurt me, A hurt I cannot forgive. The memory was fading And the hurt becoming dim, Until you said and did things That reminded me of him. Like you, he used to visit Even though I didn’t ask And now he is in my thoughts Instead of back in the past. Maybe you don’t realise Just what it is you do, I’ve put my fears on paper In the hope you’ll see it too. Sometimes I feel I’m being followed Because you are always there, Even when I’m on my own then suddenly you appear. And some of the jokes you make Don’t give me too much credit, make me wonder what you meant And why you really said it. Please don’t say things to upset me That aren’t funny in the end I didn’t ask for this attention I just wanted to be your friend. This may be a repost. Not sure, couldn't find it in a search. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
OH wow, Dee... this has some very strong emotions in it. I'm so sorry that you have to relive this... but maybe that will help you get over it once and for all? Who knows... maybe things will turn out for the best  *hugs* Take care.. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
i hope you are ok. iF you are really going through this, then I feel your pain. I use to feel this way in the past and wrote few poems on it. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Frightening and yet an incredible piece. There is no doubt to what you are trying to say here, and I hope this 'friend' sees it and realizes that what is/has happened is making you frightened. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
It is ok guys, this happened a while ago. Just feeling a bit, I don't know, and wanted to post this. Thanks for reading and caring. Dee |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I wish I had the answers my friend, take care! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, just having friends to talk to is enough. Thanks. Dee |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Facing your fears may be the only way to get through them--I enjoyed this one--Great work!  ELMO |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks for the comment Elmo. I appreciate it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was an awesome poem Dee...i hate how life ironically ends up churning up feelings from the past that you spent so much time burying. Express to this person how you feel..make them understand otherwise let them go...u deserve to be happy not to be burdened BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
I can definately relate to this. Thankyou for making me feel that I am not alone in my struggles. Nice writing. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." |
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