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Don't go NO WHERE |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
TEMPT ME NOT OH DARKENED DAY, FOR SLEEP TO COME, TO REST GIVE WAY. TEMPT ME NOT, THIS FALLING NIGHT. TO CLOSE MY EYES, GIVE UP THE FIGHT. THOUGH REST IS NEEDED, A PEACEFULL GIFT. I PRAY THE LIGHT MY SOUL TO LIFT. TO PROP ME UP, TO SHORE MY WILL. FOR THE ROAD IS LONG, WITH DANGERS STILL. I CARE NOT, FOR THAT QUIET HOUR. WHERE SLEEP LAYS WAITING TO STRIP MY POWER. THERE IS NO GIFT LIKE THAT OF LIFE. DESPITE ALL TOIL, INSPITE OF STRIFE. SO DO NOT SPEAK TO ME OF REST. SO LATE THE HOUR, SO QUICK THE QUEST. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It flowed very nicely...it had a lot of feeling and emotion in it. Well done  ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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woodtic Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 87 |
THANX FOR READING xShUgArHiGhx. I'd just finished reading NOWHERE and thought yikes I,d be afraid to write a suicide note.They confuse me. If your doing yourself in because nobody cares then who's going to read the note and if they do, would they care? On the other hand if you think your going to hurt someone with your death and note then some one really does care so your suicide is selfish and invalid. = waste of good time. SO I thought, maybe an attitude change?= Tempt me not. Thanx it's cool to be read I ain't never been read before exept for my hair. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea I loved this, a great new perspective!  ELMO |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Well i was glad to have read your poem wood!! I think you have a lot of talent and i look forward to reading more from you in the future! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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