Dark Poetry #3 |
Tumour |
Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
TUMOUR Surely it came The answer To all my questions The gateway never seemed more open Eagerly for me to tread And the herds behind Never seemed more fierce The autumn trees Weeps an elegy In harmony With my solemn wish To live the life I loved to hate How I loathe thee Cruel destiny Obligating me to the fall And the image Of distant beauty Untouchable to me Death spreads inside And pain, razorsharp Cuts my dying heart And leaves me Wanting to hate The life that I loved [This message has been edited by Broken (edited 12-14-2001).] |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Oh i love this so much, It is a great poem and you express yourself really well you made it really touching and got everything across good job Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Wonderfully said.... Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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