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Dark Poetry #3

On The Mist Of The Ocean's Wind

Dark Poet
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-12 03:42 AM

On The Mist Of The Ocean's Wind
Copyright 2001
Written by James Edward Shields

She once sung with the sparrows
She once sang to their tune
But now she sings in mourning
On the mist of the ocean’s wind

High up on a cliff top
High up above the rocks
Forever a dirge she sings
On the mist of the ocean’s wind

The waves crash like her spirit
The waves roar her banshee song
Upon the shore so lonely
On the mist of the ocean’s wind

Her soul is felt in day
Her soul is felt in night
Especially around the rocks
On the mist of the ocean’s wind

The clouds look on silent
The clouds are joined by the stars
This is where she died so lonely
On the mist of the ocean’s wind

Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace.

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

1 posted 2001-12-14 01:27 PM

Dark, medieval and lyric. And such a beautiful title, "On The Mist Of The Ocean's Wind". Awe..

Base not your joy upon the deeds of others,
for what is given can be taken away. -Peter Steele

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-12-14 05:00 PM

you paint a great portrait with
your writing, so in order
not to get carried away i will
leave it at this,
good job.

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2001-12-15 04:28 AM

The title captured me...

superb piece

~ Tara ~

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2001-12-18 02:35 PM

I like this.. well written. The title also grabbed my attention.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

5 posted 2001-12-19 10:21 AM

Beautiful as always...put a softer side on my aggitated mood this morning...thank you.

Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

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