Dark Poetry #3 |
Maybe Jon, Maybe me |
carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
so maybe we should puke that's what i remember last maybe i don't want this anymore as the brown (edited by a moderator) tried to kiss my ass you stupid sense of nothing haven't youu heard i guess not because its not been said call me i need some time you should know i have eyes so blind yet my years, fears, and pulling live within a time autistic fear is rampant discheveled twice must i back up to see that being alone has finally damn does it still hurt give me one i'd scream too until you can unless you don't and just think we might care to fight because what i think to be just may be i love can you ? J.L. Koehler [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
whoa..lots of raw emotion here...! interesting write my friend..hope your anger subsides.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was full of anger and emotion...you really put ur feelings into this one!!! Great write! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great expression my friend. i love coming back and catching up on all of your work that i miss. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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