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Joie de Vivre Junior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 21USA |
disrupted sought to justify their power in an argument their rule to be accepted as an expression of will but, my God this propaganda, others will contend man has free-will to control this defiance refuses to obey those rulers of destiny take away the cause seeking now to hide clarification a practical stand against dangerous ideas defying the sun to leave aside obedience a triumphant dead awaiting five pillars: *there is no god but the one God *enticing five prayers of purification *the spiritualized will share His wealth *and less feast upon the mouth of God *a pilgrimage for the sacrificed the true prophet* enlightened understanding* loving the uncommon man* a hearty shrine to all* kissing black stones* beating their breasts and weep for the slain the enemy battlefield conquered innocence a dawn of passion suffers of a martyred few and a murdered many disrupted a culture resurging for politics to dominate those Western ideas a modern superiority to reform clarity witnessed in the death of no God the true teachings bleeding upon vengeance lost in the will of arguments [This message has been edited by Joie de Vivre (edited 10-06-2001).] |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
I like this. I had to read it several times. I still don't know if I understand all of it, but there is a lot of this I can really relate to. I've had a lot of the same feelings lately. Thanks for a good one. JT |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Outstanding... ~Tier |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
this is really, really good. it does feel like people are missing the point of their own doctrine, sometimes, doesn't it? great writing here. i want more! -Dave |
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