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Dark Poetry #3

innocent illusion

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

0 posted 2001-12-04 09:25 PM

I can't believe
I'm losing sleep over u.
It can't be true,
these feelings just won't leave,
even after your suffocating
yet innocent looking
jaws tore my heart
and soul apart,
leaving me cold and lifeless.

My heart u held in retention,
in eternal imprisonment
with malevolent intentions.
An archangel hellbent
on improving me,
when my imperfections
are what set me
apart from everyone...

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2001-12-04 10:32 PM

Very stylish write, I especially liked the second verse, thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2001-12-22 01:50 PM

when my imperfections
are what set me
apart from everyone...

I loved that part--it's so tru--"I do not know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody"

ELMO

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-12-22 03:05 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

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