Dark Poetry #3 |
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Shadows [In My Mind] |
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ForeverMyOwn Junior Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 13Brighton, MI |
Lost in the dark, but a fire burns. A lone wolf barks, yet he will not return. Shadows and memories, swirl in my mind. But of these memories, none can be kind. They fight and sting, all i feel is the pain. The pain these bring, leave my soul broken and stained. Evil, real evil, is the taking of a human life. Whether a man would be dying, even eventually… it doesn’t matter. If God does exist… this life, every |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I appreciate the dualism in your style. The concept is one of deep meaning for you, and likewise so in others' relative meaning when reading...Yet, it is very well written in easy-to-follow verse. Nice. By the way, "broken"... but still healable... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes if I get really involved with new friends and situations I almost forget the pain....James |
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