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| Dark Poetry #3 |
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Liquid Depression |
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LTEvans Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72Lenham, England |
I thought I would post something nice and tacky. Strike it down if you will. Liquid Depression The feel of warm water, The steam on the mirror, Don’t start to falter, Pick up the scissors. The feel of cold metal, The cloudy iron stain, Don’t question mettle, Water covers mainland pain. The feel of warm enervation, The cattle colour of water, Don’t listen to agitation, Feels better, well sort of. [This message has been edited by LTEvans (12-09-2002 10:33 PM).] |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
I really liked this sentiment from you.I have been manic depressive for years, even attempted a couple times.But now even though things aren't always good, i can now manage the bad without the medication |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
OKay, with pleasure. This poem really stinks! j/k I think the poem is rather interesting, but difficult to follow. I like your apparent play on words Don’t question mettle "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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