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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-11 09:00 PM

Grey by Vivian So

When the curtain closed,
The light was dimmed, my eyes were red.
All the bitterness behind sharpen words you couldn't see.
All you saw was my blowsy hairs;
A person after fifteen years together was a stranger.
No wits was the name you called me,
When I soundlessly did the paper works.
Have it every occured to you that
I had my hairs this way to keep you comfort?
All I wouldn't have minded if not for your words.
How they sounded in my ears I still remembered.
You cut the strings, my soul's supplies,
And struck my heart with your bloodless sneers.
For all these I should have hated you,
But though I searched and tried I could find none...in my heart.
All things vaporated to the thin air but wounds...which would never be healed.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2001-11-11 09:36 PM

I like this!!--It's very deep & I may not understand every part, but it was written from the heart I see, & that is great!!

LOVE ELMO

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2001-11-12 04:37 PM

hehe, I'm not married. LOL

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-11-12 08:32 PM

Interesting, hearfelt story, well done.
And aren't you glad you're not married?? LOL
Sandra

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-11-13 01:56 PM

"A person after fifteen years together was a stranger."

i absolutely loved that line that you said....it has so much meaning to it. Isnt it weird how someone can just appear completely different and be a total stranger to us after one thing that happens reguardless to how long we knew him/her for?

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2001-11-13 02:25 PM

LOL Though I know it's better to be single, I often wish to have somone love me for life.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

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