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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2001-11-07 02:55 PM

I'm reposting this poem because i just got it published in "The best poems and poets of 2001."
In life things run parallel
  Constantly out of reach
You can stretch and stretch
But never touch or meet.
           Yet,
Still you try to defeat
The barriar, The distance
           For
  That almost touching
         Instant.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-11-07 03:01 PM

Jeremiah, nice to see you again. Congratulations on the publishing of your poem. And we are also in Voices on the Web, same page

Sandra

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

2 posted 2001-11-07 10:30 PM

Congratulations. Very good poem.

JT

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2001-11-08 12:17 PM

thank you very much for your replies. but i regret to inform you I did not get a chance to buy voices on the web but i wish i still could. if i can please let me know.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2001-11-08 06:42 PM

This is great!! And congrats for the publication!!

LOVE ELMO

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-11-08 08:52 PM

Congrats to you. It is good to see when someone gets published even if they write only for themself.

We are born into this world alone, and we will die alone. It is what we do between those times that matters. This is where we leave our mark.

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

6 posted 2001-11-09 03:39 AM

Nicely written. I like your apparently freestyle form that still comes across with a sense of rhythm.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-11-09 07:03 AM

Congratulations Jeremiah...James

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