Dark Poetry #3 |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
When brutal smiles become kind lies and cold hugs follow gentle rages that make you realize lying awake at night only feeds the demon of your own fears. Things that are worth dying for don't even exist and no one cares about the weeping flower in the garden tonight. The one that lost herself because of someone elses fight. And i'd give in to any of those brutal smiles not to have ever known about the kind lies. ~Carman |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
a beautifully sad poem...I hope to see more. You write with emotion. Thanks for the read...wanderer lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
Nice picture painted by " brutal smiles", but a rather sad ring to it. All in all the piece flowed with a rather nice pace. Great work " Pardon me while i burst into flames, i've done enough of the world, and it's peoples mindless cave, so pardon me, pardon me, i'll never be the same. |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
thank you wandering and wizard... you're thoughts and replies are very appreciated Carman |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
You have style!!! This one captured me from the opening lines! Come visit my board. Please email me, I could not get through on your email. *S* mYsTiC [This message has been edited by mystic requiem (edited 01-30-2001).] |
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