Dark Poetry #3 |
Knight |
Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Let me be your knight.. When times of shadows near. Let me be that shinning light that brightens thy day. Let me show you the way. Open the path let the light of the knight shine in. Let me be that knight that guards thy life.. Thought the storming nights. Let me hush those tears and clam thy fears; Let me show you the way.. Through those foggy nights, let the moon shine through. "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Excellently done. I enjoyed the basic message of the poem, and the medieval symbolism intertwined with darkness. Well done! |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Thank you Baroni! I've always had this passion for medieval times. Sometimes it shows. Thank you for you kind words, Snowie "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice my homestate friend... jwesley |
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