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Once Upon Antiquity |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). 
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Once Upon Antiquity When I am blind humanity drips with sugar coated words, kind. Pretend to be only as society wishes of me. what of the true epitome? I have taken all that I am and all I am to be, hidden it deep within, away from devouring eyes that wish to see. Once upon antiquity I stood naked, exposing the true me and found antipathy. Once again without disgrace I step forward, face to face Unwilling to hide within anxiety, standing proud and naked for all of the world to see. {written about myself and of myself} "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
"Unwilling to hide within anxiety," As someone that suffers from occasional depression and anxiety attacks, I say we must never give in to it. Wise words in that one line.  And I lie here in bed all alone- I can't mend |
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Immortal Beloved Junior Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 42the carpathians |
This one really spoke to me,i relate to these feelings so much,you've said alot about my own lifetime in so few words,thank you  ammelid Fere libenter homines id quod volunt credunt~Julius Caesar |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
I do not think that you cause antipathy... I for one have been moved by your openness. Your poetry has been added to my library.... excellent work...... Keep 'em coming! Does the name pavlov ring a bell? |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
I thank you all for your kind words and am honored that you enjoyed. Baroni, You make me blush...I type the words and some times they seem to just flow, not making much sense until I go back and read again...and then at other times I simply think they are no good at all. I am honored to be added to your library...thank you kindly...{I do not know if you go there, but I post in Adult forum too if you would like to read some thing different some time.} In case you would like to know, as well, and maybe would like to venture to read some time...I am also writting a book...am in the middle of chapter 2 now...lol...maybe I do too many things at one time, what do you think?! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 "Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan [This message has been edited by alibaster (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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