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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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INNOCENCE Where was I, when life was perceived simple? When innocence, was a smile with a dimple. Where everyday, felt like Saturday afternoon. Care-free & comfortable, far from any doom. Did I miss it somehow? Skip past it all? Fly to the future? Walk down the wrong hall? Did the sign say adulthood, the one I couldn't read? Did I choose the wrong path? Plant the bad seed? Was it my actions, that turned it this way? Something I did? Something I failed to say? How did it all fall, on my tiny shoulders? A million little pebbles, rolled into the heaviest of boulders. "It's not my fault!" I try to convince, but there's no other explanation, for lost innocence! LOVE ELMO  |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
"A million little pebbles, rolled into the heaviest of boulders." This says it all, girl...wonderful writing here. Don't care what people say |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...how could it have possibly been your fault?! (((hugs))) |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx guys--i know deep down it was never really my fault--i was so young--but I get that feeling every now & then that it could have been stopped or even prevented--who knows--LOVE ELMO |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx James!  |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
" When innocence, was a smile with a dimple. Where everyday, felt like Saturday afternoon. Care-free & comfortable, far from any doom." ahhhh..htat sums up what it felt like to be young and innocent, katie. i liked this one very much thanks. i guess responsibility is hard to take when innocence has just been left behind. thanks for sharing, once again i have to say that i enjoyed the read see the glass crack like a flower opening |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea thanx cherish, it's tough sometimes, but we all get through it somehow LOVE ELMO |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ah yes, i can relate. Wouldn't it be nice to have that childhood innocense again? To look on everybody as friends, not think negatives about them, judging them etc. Ahh the world would be a much better place if we could all retrain our innocense. But nothing you did or didn't do let to this, it's just the sometimes stark realities of being an adult. Trials are sent to try us etc... *hugs* Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea i love childhood--I think that's why I am going to college to become a kindergarten teacher--i always want to be a part of that innocence & non--judgmentals thanx for the reply LOVE ELMO |
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