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Dark Poetry #3

Mistress Nightmare

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

0 posted 2001-10-17 08:16 AM

Lock the door to my dreams
in an attempt to silence her screams.
Gate off my world of velvet skies
as I escape behind slumbering eyes.
Lay my head upon self inflicted lies
and cover myself with a halo of flies
as I release her dancing deamons with slowing breath
and Nightmare runs to embrace her lover Death.

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001

"Sleep those little slices of death, how I loathe them." Edgar Allan

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-10-17 02:57 PM

Very beautiful.... I love the symbolism. I hope your dreams get better...

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-10-17 10:27 PM

i like this. It has a very interesting flow..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-22 03:56 PM

Enjoyed alibaster...James

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2001-10-22 07:22 PM

Enjoyed the analagies here hon, different perceptions of dreams and realities...
Well done..

Isis

*The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-10-22 07:48 PM

awesome alibaster. i loved the imagery you used-they took my breath away. good job...loved the read very much

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       wave           a     ...r    the emotions crash in the reef of life
                 w    e

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

6 posted 2001-10-24 05:08 PM

So nice.

"Lock the door to my dreams"
"in an attempt to silence her screams."
Wondeerful!

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