Dark Poetry #3 |
Doomsayer... |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So close, self-destruction. Timing, my enemy wanting to overthrow feelings, of Doom... Extinguish the anxiety of tomorrows. Leave me a conquest, just one... Let me triumph for a day, topple the enemy, tip the balance of feel. And when the Myst settles, let the warmth of a new day Reign me forever. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-15-2001).] |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Very nice.... painful, but also hopeful.. I really enjoyed it. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Nt...I am sorry to see you in such pain..but I am glad you can see the hope..This is well written...enjoyed the read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Baroni Alan ..thank you both..sometimes that mood swing takes hold..and I write the unexpected..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, wouldn't it be nice to have things our way, for just ONCE?? Good write, Maureen. Take care. Sandra |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
"tip the balance of feel" i loved the imagery in that line- wonderful words Wynter. youll get your chance to triumph one day thanks for this- i enjoyed it very much.
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
Really nice way of putting feelings that I, and so many others, can relate to. Good job. JT |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"...write the unexpected..." but beautiful dear wynter... jwesley |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
cat...I would be in 7th heaven if it ever happened to me...one can only hope... Thank you Sandra cherish ..happy my words brought some feeling *s JT ...thank you for reading and your kind words *s jwesley..I am always "the unexpected..." thank you for your kindness ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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