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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-15 10:19 AM

So close,
self-destruction.
Timing, my enemy
wanting to overthrow feelings,
of Doom...

Extinguish the anxiety of tomorrows.
Leave me a conquest, just one...
Let me triumph for a day,
topple the enemy, tip the balance of feel.
And when the Myst settles,
let the warmth of a new day
Reign me forever.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-15-2001).]

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-10-15 10:43 AM

Very nice.... painful, but also hopeful.. I really enjoyed it.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-10-17 10:29 PM

Nt...I am sorry to see you in such pain..but I am glad you can see the hope..This is well written...enjoyed the read

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-10-22 07:38 PM

Baroni
Alan ..thank you both..sometimes that mood swing takes hold..and I write the unexpected..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-10-22 08:32 PM

Oh yes, wouldn't it be nice to have things our way, for just ONCE?? Good write, Maureen.
Take care.
Sandra

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-10-23 10:17 PM

"tip the balance of feel"
i loved the imagery in that line- wonderful words Wynter. youll get your chance to triumph one day

thanks for this- i enjoyed it very much.

"......",said the wise mute.

JT
Member

since 2001-09-28

Posts 69
Arkansas, USA

6 posted 2001-10-23 10:31 PM

Really nice way of putting feelings that I, and so many others, can relate to. Good job.

JT

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-10-24 02:05 PM

"...write the unexpected..." but beautiful dear wynter...

jwesley

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-10-24 02:42 PM

cat...I   would be in  7th heaven if it  ever happened to me...one can only hope... Thank you Sandra

cherish ..happy  my words  brought some feeling *s

JT ...thank you for  reading and your kind words *s

jwesley..I am always "the unexpected..." thank you for your kindness

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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