Dark Poetry #3 |
A Director's Cut |
carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
can i walk the miles should i talk with the smile does it help to live a life wearing your shoes will anyone believe me when i say today i've but just begun i'm very far from done the music you see is the battle the wordsyou see the words you see without knowing the feeling without the breathing the essence is a war the feeling is a chore the feeling of more the wordsyou see care to dance with me dare to chance our lives prepare to enjoy the sounds the wordsyou see so many things we've seen too many dreams we've known enough to get us through to again the wordsyou see about the eyes so bright around enough to stop the moon care to choose with me dare to squint to see are you still here have you gone away J.L. Koehler |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So yearning, and almost a mystical quality to it. Bravo hon.. isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
carolinadreams, Brava! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is written beautifully carolinadreams Full of longing, but also hope? Kinda sad. Another great one from you. Take care! ~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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