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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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the devil held my hand as, thrashing, i went through the day. anger gripped me tighter with every breath. the fear in me spewed from my mouth in torturous tones, in blood-stained color. my body became a shell for demons. my broken heart lay at my feet-- i kicked it away so no one would see, the bleeding me... -dgvarner 2-98 "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
very powerful. Enjoyed the read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"i kicked it away so no one would see the bleeding me." Nice lines, dg. Would that it were so easy at times, yet at others . . . "i held it up so all could be a witness for me." Krawdad |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
well, thats one heavy poem, glad its an old one.  damn devils. Ok, group hug. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
DRAGONPOE..thanks for your reply..glad you enjoyed reading me KRAW..yes..very true point.. i wrote this for my brother-in-law, and his approach was to hide the true hurt inside..but had it been me..i'd have been more inclined to write it the way you did...i'm a heart-on-the-sleeve type person...! PARKER..LOL @ you! group hug sounds like a plan..i'm there! hugs (pass 'em around!!) , g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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