Dark Poetry #3 |
Song Of The Broken Hearted |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
One day when the bitterness of these times are past I'll remember the foolishness of my own treacherous heart & savor the taste of my own tears... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to perhaps know again the soft smiles and tender touch of one who waited and still waits outside the walls of my heart. . . sorry. . . just a little inspiration. . . well done. . . but sad. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Tiersdin My dear friend, what pain is read here. Sorry for the hurt you've been caused. All I can say is keep on keeping on. It might help to know someone cares. *hugs* Sylvia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...hope that day comes soon...James |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hugs for you, Tiersdin. Such a sad tale but with a hope there for it to improve. Dee |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very powerful impact this has....... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
sven: Thank you for such a wonderful poetic reply. *smiles* sylvia: *hugs* thank you so much for such a kind comment. It is deeply appreciated. James: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked the poem... Dee: It was written a while ago... the pain is a lot less these days. Thank you for reading... sea: Thank you for commenting... *smiles* ~Tier |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Tiersdin, I liked this one. A few words saying it all. Just hope you're right about it. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is very very good... ~Connie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The emotion speaks loud and clear in these few words. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This was really good for so few words. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
The hurt and pain you were suffering in this poem is very clear. You spoke your feelings well. good job! LadyPeach1 |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
I'm awestruck. This poem is so meaningful, yet so concise. Masterful. |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
Wow! You've said a whole lot in just a little space. Good job. JT |
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