Dark Poetry #3 |
does he really exist? |
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Does he really exist, this man who touched my heart? The one who wanders through my mind, showing me things I never dreamed were possible. He is the arms that lift me when I fall, the lips that kiss away my tears, the eyes that watch over me when I sleep. He is the man who comes to me in my dreams. He is part of me now and I love him as such. Or is he a dream, a spectre in my reality? Someone I created in my need to be loved. [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-04-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'd much prefer him to be real he's out there Dee........big hugs to you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes, dreams come true. Hope this one does for you. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Sea and Midnitesun, I'm sure he is out there somewhere. I just need to hear from him. Dee |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lots of men want to be loved also...and to share kisses...so you have a good shot at it...James |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thank you James. Glad you stopped by. Dee |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I hope he really does exist for you. I hope this dream comes true. Funny, how sometimes somebody takes a piece of our heart, and just won't give it back dammit. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Yes it is funny. Like we wouldn't miss a little bit of our heart Dee |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
I thought this was really good but where everyone else took it to be longing for a guy, I was thinking more of a questioning the reality of a guardian angel or spirit guide you believe is with you. I may be completly off track as to what you meant but that's one of the cool things about a good poem, everyone gets something different out of it. JT |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
JT I love your interpretation of my poem. It isn't what I was thinking but I can see it in there now you have pointed it out. The man this is for is like a Guardian Angel to me. He looks after me, worries about me and kicks my bum when I need it too. And I love him dearly (just don't tell him ) I just don't see him as often as I would like to hence the "does he really exist". Dee [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I understand these feelings all too well my friend, you take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Eddie, I knew you would. Dee |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Don't give up, Dee. You'll find him someday. All writing comes |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Lone Wolf. I have found him, I just keep losing him. Dee |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh this poem touched home for me..I too once had that same dream. Trust me when I say Dreams do come true..I have Proof!!! Living happily with my Dream Man. He (your Dream) will appear before you when you lest expect it. -------------- |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks for reading kitkat. Glad it meant something to you. Dee |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I think he exists. If he's in your heart, then he's real. Life just has a way of interfering with these connections. Just keep him in mind. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Parker, I do keep him in mind...a lot I know he will be back one day I just have to be patient. Dee |
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