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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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adrift in a sea of nothing surrounded by spectres demons of my own making darkness envelops echoes of shadows call reaching…. groping yet finding nothing suffocating from too much air seeing in the blackness scares me |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
I think it's your first post I read. I found it so beautiful. Thanks for the read. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent work here my friend, loved the first verse. And yes, I'm glad I didn't find this one first!  You take care! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thank you allis, for reading and commenting. Dee |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, you crept up on me Thanks for reading my work. You are one of the constants and I appreciate that. Take care, Dee |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Here I was 'standing on the shore' ... and you - 'adrift in a sea' Are we on the same WAVE of thought ?  You did a nice job on this one, gal~ COOL new pic~ *Hubba-Hubba*  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Didn't you see me waving as I floated past you, Marge? This was a black mood that is, thankfully, gone for now. Thanks for reading - another constant I appreciate Oh and I think the new pic is pretty good too!  Wish I looked like that all the time.  Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-24-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Interesting write. kind of reminds me of my "The Blue Ocean" probably different meaning though. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
We'll have to compare notes and see, Parker. Dee |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
dee Great work! What wonderful imagery. Thanks a lot. I really enjoyed this. Sylvia |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"suffocating from too much air" I like that line, very good. Glad the mood is gone |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sylvia, thanks for reading my poem Glad you liked it.Sea, as you know the mood is well and truly gone now Dee |
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