Dark Poetry #3 |
Angel Dream |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I fell in love So hard and true The day I laid First eyes on you Your vision caught me By surprise It calmed my soul And soothed my cries Your gentle tremble To my touch I want some more And miss so much So until the next time You're with me An angel dream Is what you'll be G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely write. I hope Angel Dreams come true for you If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May all your dreams come true, G.A. Nicely done. All writing comes |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Angels do smile upon us from time to time!!!! Sweet one Mr Webb!!!! Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I really enjoyed reading this one. Left me wanting so much more for the writer. Excellent work. Don't care what people say |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
An angel dream, what a lovely thought! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
aww...this is soooo sweet. I just love this |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
excellent writing... ~Tier |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is cute--I love how it makes me wanna LOVE ELMO <3 |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all, I'm glad you liked this piece, though I don't believe it to be one of my better pieces. I feel like it's missing something. But it'll do, after all it's only wishful thinking. Thanks again. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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