Dark Poetry #3 |
Empty Dreams |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Empty Dreams I wake with just a thought The scent of you, still it lingers The warmth, body and soul I reach through the twilight of my dreams Longing for that briefest touch Finding only emptiness Residence now to my barren dreams These voided memories Where you once dwelled "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ This breaks my heart~ Sending you the biggest *Hug* Love ya'~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very sad thing to suddenly find ourselves alone...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to find those thoughts. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marge ~ There's nothing like a big hug to help hold one's heart together. I thank you my friend, take care! James ~ it takes some getting used to that's for sure. Sven ~ I seem to spend a lot of time in search of my thoughts, thanks for stopping by. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A thoughtful but sad write Eddie. Hugs for you. Dee |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Dee ~ Thank you my friend, you take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Heartfelt write. Beautiful words for a sad subject. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I know this...all too well. I hope for your sake that it's just a good write and not reality. But if it is reality, I feel for you my friend for I reside there as well. Good job. Regret not that which you have done, |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Tracey ~ 'twas a sad time! I appreciate you adding your thoughts, thank you. G. A. Webb ~ Sadly it is reality and I know far too many of us know this feeling Sad too that you know it as well, you take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ah the lonliness of an empty dream but beautifully expressed none the less! *hugs* from an Aussie mate... Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ah the lonliness of an empty dream but beautifully expressed none the less! *hugs* from an Aussie mate... Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I hate being alone--so I can symphasize-- I like this one LOVE ELMO |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Isis ~ Thank you, and thank you! qtpieelmo ~ there are many types of loneliness, glad you enjoyed. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I felt this one! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The Lady of Shallot ~ It is good to know the reader can "feel" my words, thank you! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very sad write, my friend. I can so relate to these feelings. ((HUG)) All writing comes |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It saddens me that you can relate my friend. Hugs to you to, take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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