Dark Poetry #3 |
The Rainbow's End |
TeChNo KiTtY Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22Wisconsin, USA |
searching for the rainbow's end, stumbling through clover. i don't believe you're really gone, and yet you say it's over. you tell me you've found someone new, i almost see her face. she's who you've been looking for, i guess she took my place. it's her you hold as you fall asleep, how come it's not me? i refuse to believe you don't need me now, i suppose i'll never see. so blindly i'll keep running, chasing the rainbow's end. avoiding the truth, and nursing.. a heart that will never mend. "i tried so hard, and got so far..but in the end, it doesn't even matter.." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes. . . we have to mend the heart on our own. . . well done. . . I liked the rainbow metaphor here. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
If you find where the rainbow ends, let me know too okay? Beautifully written. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow--did you read my heart?--This is exactly what it's sayin--Well written LOVE ELMO |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Time heals all wounds, even though it feels as though it will always ache to think of love etc. Well versed, describing how any of us have felt after such a betrayl.. Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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