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The Hole in the Wall |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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She stares at the hole in the wall, and wonders why he did it. She shakes her head in disbelief, and asks him why he hit it. He cannot give an answer yet, his anger is still too hot. They both stand still, afraid to speak. The silence is all they've got to separate the fist from the face. She backs away slowly, and he stares at the hole in the wall, and wonders why he did it. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I know this feeling. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you. It's sad to say, but it was from a past personal experience. The hole was never patched, and neither was the relationship. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is great & sadly I also know how it feels--  LOVE ELMO |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey there, Elmo! Sorry you are familiar with this type of emotional bonding. I never found a positive way to deal with it except to leave. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidniteSun~ Better the wall than you !  I hear it never gets better ... and usually worse. Glad you got out of it !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, Marge...it's better. I was the wall once already, and you are right, it never gets better. A fast retreat is the only answer. |
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